Who Alice meets and their relationship within the book

Feedback from the class on rough cut 25/11

From the feedback we were given we were first told on the good things about our music video and stuff within it the class had liked, these were;

• A lot of effort put into the music video with costumes.
• Have told the story well, can see from the beginning Alice is going into Wonderland from the spinning effect.
• The black and white filter when the artist says 'Is everything in black and white'.
• When everything rewinds on itself to go back into reality.

We also got some improvements, some of these were;

• At the start the artist moves her lips when the song hasn't started and it can be confusing.
• The start of the song is a lot stronger than the end.
• Try adding a cross dissolve at the beginning see if it blends the effect better.
• Editing the ending more to the beat.
• Use jump cuts to get her up the stairs by cutting the clip to the beat.
• Try using some other alternative effects instead of colour filters.

Rough Cut 27/11

Feedback from Marissa

As Marissa didnt view out rough cut on tuesday the 25th we have shown her wht we have so far today.Overall she was impressed with our music video as she loves the concept of it and its finally comih all together.However, we did get some feedback on improvements that need to be made such as we need to fix up the lip syncing makig sure its on point.We also need to tidy up the ending which we are working on in todays lesson.

What we need to do in todays lesson 27/11

At the start of todays lesson Marisa had looked through our rough cut to see on some improvements we can do today. Nothing was that major and our rough cut is coming along quite well but it does seem that whilst finishing the ending some clips must've been moved and became out of sync. As well as this we want to tidy up the ending a lot more and just overall improve it.

So the targets of todays lesson:

• Fix some clips that have become un-synced whilst editing and finishing the ending of the rough cut.
• Generally improve the ending of our music video

These are not that hard of tasks to do as fixing the lip syncing will be really fast to do as it must've just moved whist deleting clips or creating the ending of our music video. To generally improve the ending we are going to first remove the music files that are still connected to clips that we put in, we need to make sure cuts happen more smoother and give a general tidy up of the ending. We also had the idea of adding jump cuts when the subject is walking the stairs and adding earlier filters to make the filters that appear later look less random.

Music production-filming the opening.

Here are pictures of us filming the opening of our music video which was filmed last as oppose to first. This is because we didn't have the book of Alice in wonderland which meant we wasn't able to film as planned.

 

 

Things that went well (response regards to our rough cut)