Feedback from Louisa 2/12

In todays lesson Louisa had looked through our rough cut to give us feedback on improvements we need to make in this lesson.

Targets for today;

• Lip syncing has fallen out on certain clips (probably due to editing other parts of the music video).
• On the drop the beat speeds up so cut to the sped up beat as well as the build up that we've already done.
• Add jump cuts to the beat when she's running up the stairs
• Try play around with different effects that we can use instead of the colour filters that we use at the end

For this lesson we plan to firstly fix the lip syncing again, it seems when creating the beginning it may of effected some of the clips that were lip synced further on and made them out of sync. After this we can add jump cuts on the sped up beat which appears at the end of the build up to make the jump cuts match the beat of the song a lot better. When we've finished this we can proceed till polishing the ending a lot more, to do this we need to add jump cuts when she is running up the stairs so it fits to the beat more than just adding colour filters, in addition to this we are gonna try other effects that we could potentially use instead of the colour filters.

Once we've finished all of these targets we also want to try and improve the ending as the book in the shot we used is not focused very well so to improve this we want to add in shots that we have of the book focused as we have multiple ones so we hope one would fit well with the shot we already have.