Feedback for pitch1

As a group we were all equally happy with the feeback we got given by Louissa.The majority of our ideas she liked and could see our idea clearly and how we planned our music video to be.In particular she was pleased with our idea of introducing new characters in every verse.This idea was unique and the whole class liked this idea too as we thought outside of the box. We had also presented a clear personal profile that illustrates our target audience.This gave viewers a good understanding of who our particular target audience is and what they can expect from them when it comes to both music and personal lifestyle.