Feedback from the class on rough cut 25/11

From the feedback we were given we were first told on the good things about our music video and stuff within it the class had liked, these were;

• A lot of effort put into the music video with costumes.
• Have told the story well, can see from the beginning Alice is going into Wonderland from the spinning effect.
• The black and white filter when the artist says 'Is everything in black and white'.
• When everything rewinds on itself to go back into reality.

We also got some improvements, some of these were;

• At the start the artist moves her lips when the song hasn't started and it can be confusing.
• The start of the song is a lot stronger than the end.
• Try adding a cross dissolve at the beginning see if it blends the effect better.
• Editing the ending more to the beat.
• Use jump cuts to get her up the stairs by cutting the clip to the beat.
• Try using some other alternative effects instead of colour filters.